Exile and Entrance
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This book is one of the best books I've read in years. The only one
better is MURPHY'S LORE also by Patrick Thomas. What can I say about this
book? Some parts of it are horror. The horror is such nasty ugliness that
when it is transcended by the beauty of the book you are simply overcome.
There is humor enough to make you smile all day. The SF elements rival the
best space opera. Brave characters that include a little girl make you wish
you could share their lives. The characters are so vividly drawn. I kept
expecting one of them to tap me on the shoulder. BUY THIS BOOK! This book
is off the scale good. Fantastic!
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A futuristic adventure of betrayal and newfound trust, Exile and
Entrance introduces a dark science fiction environment, quickly blanketing it
with fantastical elements, and adequately intermingles both genres to create
a unique novel. In the near future, the United States government grows
corrupt after the forced relationship with an alien race from the planet
Liberty. For reasons unknown to most of humankind, the government violently
abducts hundreds of individuals for a so-called exchange program with an
alien race, the ‘Muridae’. When Rick Wagner discovers his baby sister has
been selected as an indentured extradite, and that his parents have willingly
surrendered her, he hides her and forces the government to send him instead.
Rick is warped away to the Planet Liberty, to a city called Tore. He
befriends a small human girl named Susie en route to his exile, and in turn
seeks out her safety upon arrival. Not an easy task, as the Muridae,
human-sized rat people, have planned to auction off the six-year old as a
slave. Rick fortunately makes the acquaintance of Burke and Kerr, two
monstrous, multi-limbed aliens from alternate planets in the universe, who
themselves were indentured as exiles from their home worlds many years past.
Now well-regarded individuals, they take Rick under their wings (or furry and
pebble-rocked appendages, in this case) and aid him in saving Susie from
certain slavery. From this point on Rick from Dirt (Earth) learns the
ways of life in the city of Tore, and the true reason for his coming here—to
train as a warrior for the multi-cultural Tore games, Wrestlemania-like
events that can leave its participants crippled. Kerr and Burke lead Rick
through extensive training, teaching him how to live life entirely as a
warrior. This doesn’t happen, of course. Following his human desires,
Rick seeks happiness in his relationship with Susie as memories of his sister
quickly fade. He meets and falls in love with Sasha, a blue-haired Amoropath
(hooker), finds a way to defeat his foe Smed-lee, a Muridae with a penchant
for inflicting pain, and finally seeks out other Earthlings. The premise
of the novel is intriguing, and extremely well written, and Thomas leaves us
with many unanswered questions, calling for a sequel. The biggest of these
is: Why? Why has the government decided to shove off humans for such selfish
Muridaen reasons, only to presumably get nothing in return?
Approximately ten characters are introduced from their own points-of-view,
some in first person: at first this can be confusing to the casual reader. No
doubt Thomas had a flurry of inventive insight when creating all these
personalities, but the reading would have been somewhat more fluid if limited
to, say, half as many. Patrick Thomas writes with a gripping narrative
style filled with some truly imaginative ideas, as Exile and Entrance clearly
shows. Perhaps this effort would have been more tightly focused with an extra
pass at editing. There are pages dedicated to the explanation of weapons,
tools, even bodily waste techniques. Lengthy descriptions complicate simple
scenes, and although they detail the strengthening relationships between the
various characters, they do not necessarily move the story along.
However, these are minor quibbles. Thomas’ elegant prose and apparently
knowledgeable insight of the Muridaen world thoroughly entertain. Exile and
Entrance is a captivating read for those willing to experience an extremely
detailed sociological breakdown for an new, imaginative world. This is
worthwhile reading, and not purely effortless escapism, though the reader
will sure enter into a world of depth, action, and powerful adventure.
-Michael Laimo, PIRATE WRITINGS MAGAZINE: Tales Of Fantasy, Mystery and
Science Fiction
"A passionate balance of drama and humor. An addictive read."
-Ariel Masters, Co-author EVERMORE and WOMBERS AND INNUENDOES
The release signing of EXILE AND ENTRANCE broke the one day sales record for
most copies of a single title sold in one day at Science Fiction,
Mysteries and More in Manhattan on March 15, 1997.